Monday, September 6, 2021
Writing challenge!
Hello!
Today we got a new task and it was a Writing challenge! The Writing challenge was... If our toys were to come alive whilst you were asleep what would your toys get upto?
Since I really like challenges I thought I could do that task fist!
So I first created a doc and I titled it as "Writing challenge" After that I picked a font that I liked and started my story.
The first paragraph was about what they would do while I'm a asleep.
The second pragraph was about them tidying up the mess they made.
The third paragraph was about When they finished their little party.
Here's a image of my writing I did when it was complete! :D
I hope you like this piece of writing!
Bye! :P
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Hi Amelia I liked how you explained what the writing challenge was and how you did it. I liked how you used adjectives in your writing to make it more interesting. I can see them having a pool party in the large bucket. So well written if Toystory ever make another movie they should get you to help write it.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Amelia,
ReplyDeleteWow! I really enjoyed your blog post! I like how you explained what you were doing and I love that you used paragraphs in your writing.
There are some interesting vocabulary in here - the word crawl. Have you used a thesaurus before to find other interesting words?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa