Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Writing week 8
Hello,
This week for writing Mr. jones put up five task for us to finish! Those task were kind of like pobble. Task one was to highlight the ajectives and the verbs and the adverbs in the starter bit Mr. jones wrote. Task two was to carry on the story bassed on Mr. jones starter. Task three was that we had to imagine if we were a god what would we control. Task four was to think about the picture Mr. jones gave us. Task five was to re-write the sick sentences! But I'm only going to share task two today!
Here's a picture of my work I did for task two :D
By Amelia
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Kia ora Amelia,
ReplyDeleteWow! A great piece of writing Amelia. I like how you used paragraphs and the use of question (did people make it?). I also like how you described what you saw.
I wonder if you can describe what you heard, smelt and even felt? Can you use a thesaurus to find another word for broken?
Looking forward to reading more of your writing!
- Miss Laxa